空と水分けてつばめの通ふ道 神谷宣行
sora
to mizu wakete tsubame no kayou michi Kamiya, Nobuyuki
season
word: tsubame / swallow
a swallow
dividing sky and water
flies to and fro
はりついて桜の花や酒のびん 三玉一郎
haritsuite
sakura no hana ya sake no bin Mitama,
Ichirô
season
word: sakura / cherry blossoms
cherry blossoms ——
petals stuck on
a bottle of sake
味のある一句。
Kai's Comment: This is an amusing haiku.
蘆を焼く火をのがれ来て春の鴨 岩井善子
ashi
o yaku hi o nogarekite haru no kamo Iwai,
Yoshiko
season
word: haru no kamo / spring duck
flying away from
the fire burning reeds
ducks in spring
「春の鴨」→「池の鴨」
Kai's Comment: You should change ‘ducks in spring’ to ‘ducks on a pond.’
うぐひす餅顔を並べて箱の中 山本しほ
uguisu
mochi kao o narabete hako no naka
Yamamoto, Shiho
season word: uguisu mochi / rice cake topped with
green soy flour
rice cakes
with green flour faces
lined up in the box
ふくれつらの子どもみたいなおたまじやくし 長井亜紀
fukuretsura
no kodomo mitai na otamajakushi Nagi,
Aki
season
word: otamajakushi / tadpole
like a child
with a sullen face
a tadpole
ふるさとの無骨な山も笑ひけり 安藤久美
furusato
no bukotsu na yama mo waraikeri Andô, Kumi
season
word: yama warau / mountain in springtime
when all of the tree buds open at the same time (usu. in haiku); laughing
mountain
even rugged mountains
in my hometown
laughing
憧るる独り暮らしや花の種 福田弘子
akogaruru
hitorigurashi ya hana no tane Fukuda,
Hiroko
season
word: hana no tane / flower seeds
longing
to live alone ——
flower seeds
始まりの音とはこれぞ種袋 藤岡美惠子
hajimari
no oto to wa kore zo tanebukuro Fujioka,
Mieko
season
word: tanebukuro / a bag of flower
seeds
this is the sound
that announces the start ——
a bag of flower seeds
力強い。
Ka's Comment: This is a powerful expression.
手のひらに降りくる花の一句かな 加藤百合子
tenohira
ni furikuru hana no ikku kana
Katô,
Yuriko
season word: hana /
cherry blossoms
falling onto my palm
petals of cherry blossoms
a haiku
花びらのように。
Kai's Comment: The haiku is like a cherry petal.
寝転んで畳のうへや花疲 木下誠
nekoronde
tatami no ue ya hanazukare Kinoshita,
Makoto
season
word: hanazukare / tiredness after
cherry blossom viewing
onto a tatami mat
dropping down with tiredness
after cherry blossom viewing
花疲れ花びらつけて戻りけり 豊田喜久子
hanazukare
hanabira tsukete modorikeri Toyota,
Kikuko
season
word: hanazukare / tiredness after
cherry blossom viewing
tiredness after cherry blossom viewing ——
with petals of cherry blossoms attached
returning home
この句おもしろし。
Kai's Comment: This haiku is interesting.
蜜蜂はひかりとなりて飛び回る 岡崎陽市
mitsubachi
wa hikari to narite tobimawaru Okazaki,
Yôshi
season
word: mitsubachi / honey bee
honey bees
turn into bits of light
flying around
About Hasegawa Kai, Kim Komurasaki(the Shiki team)
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